Cultural Protocol Updates

[Mbites]

http://classic.particracy.net/viewbill.p...lid=708562


Proposing new cultural protocols for Kalopia (current CP is 468 years old), with minor changes.
please consider our bipartisan proposal.
best regards.

Hey Kalosimat,

we have a few concerns we want to raise and see adressed before we approve your Cultural Protocol.
First of all we would like remove some of the 'unecessary' clutter. While we think that for the process of getting approval from moderation, the inclusion of important events is a good idea, we think it makes the bill look more 'overwhelming' if a new player sees this. So please eliminate everything before "NEW CULTURAL PROTOCOLS" except for the reference to the old Cultural Protocol which would be a nice keep to inform potential players about continuity.

Secondly we'd like you to add the real-life equivalents of the referenced pt-material in brackets. (e.g Kalopian (Greek)). Since it might be confusing for a new player who might just want to quickly look up the most basic information to start playing. As the placement in brackets makes the "RL Equivalents" Chapter of your bill obsolete, we would advice to remove it and place a link to the forum thread of the Index there. (https://forum.prtcy.com/thread-119.html)

The rest of the bill, meaning the actual content, is fine with us and would be approved if you come back with a proposal that is a little more cleaned up.